sounds really nice, like something you'd hear in the background of a youtube video! The only thing is it's a little repetitive and at the end one of the chords is a little out of key. Definitely a great improvement
i feel that the kick is legit not there i cant really even hear it plus, there needs to be more added its very repetitive, Not only that but annoying later on you can change that clap pattern at certain parts the bass could be thicker, yk, A reese bass, The chords slope could go The lead delay is sick, but it gets annoying asf i would automate that, then have little breaks where the deley just comes in Good attempt tho