Im terribly sorry for the lack of "kick" when the chorus/ hrad part comes in, its just not something I know how to do.
While I was on a writers block I made a bunch of random drsfts with potentials but didnt know how to use them, this one was just about to be deleted when I moved the block I had and made the rest of it, concluding the last day of school for me and less than 3 hrs till the end of the world (its 9 pm here), I made this!
I really enjoyed most of making this, lots of frustration and anxiety but still worth it. Frankly I dont see this as a great track but I certainly hope you do! enjoy! :)
I think this could definitely use some more lower end. Kick drum could be louder and punchier. I assume that when it kicks, it's supposed to sound more epic. I think that if you add more layers to the drums (perhaps a hihat line?) and put a bit more emphasis on the pads, you could achieve the "kick". Also try to have layers at different frequencies to avoid muddiness.