Hm... I coulda sworn I commented with some ciriticism...but apparently not lol.
At
0:54
, I think you should bring out the bass line and melody a bit, because they're sort of buried under that jammin' drum track.
And at
2:54
, try experimenting with the EQ effect on the melody and bass line there, because I still think they're buried under the drum track a little bit.
If you're not quite sure what I'm talking about, feel free to ask more questions lol. Seriously a cool track though!