Thank you all these suggestions pushes me to perfect the song, ima have to go back and play with it, thank you all for listening, it's a great feeling to have people listening to my tracks :)
Agree with Kepz, if
2:35
was a smoother sound this track would be near to perfect.
But who am i to argue, its still better than i can do, by an absolute mile!, but that one change would turn this track from an audiotool track to a professional track being bought by the masses. Well, i would buy it.
The length is perfect in my opinion, longer is better, or thats what the wife says :)
wow. I wish I could write a piece this long and this composed. often my own tracks, I feel, have the tendency to become disjointed. This holds together--and holds up--the whole ten minutes. awesome awesome track!
Im still a bigger fan of the original, but this is still very good. I wish you had kept the same bassline as in reflections, that would have sounded so good in this