So, the arp and beat with that snare line are nice and especially the use of the snare is creative, I also like that mid/bass runner synth. Concerning the arp melody, it is a bit too repetitive, I generally like repetition done cleverly, so adding a chord pad into the background could probably help, but some variation in melody could be nice. Concerning mixing, most of your elements are clipping, I would recommend trying to level each element such that it still audible, or try to EQ them. So...
...they have some space to breathe. Removing certain unwanted freqs will always give emphasis on others, such that they will sound louder, even if you actually removed things.
nice concept fr, you got an Idea and I think if you focus hard enough, you'll find the sound you're looking for. decent melody, your drum lines are alright, but I feel like you could mess with that hard, do some insane like trap instrumental stuff, or whatever you want but that's what I hear. Some parts are mixed okay, some parts definitely need some buffing out. Otherwise, not too shabby, youngin' lol keep working on it!
Hey yo, I suggest looking around and finding out who the original artist for the artwork you're using is and give them some credit at least for it, wouldn't want them to somehow find this and get pissy with you about it or something, that could get very bad depending on who they are lol.
The artwork is made by Fesbraa, and is under CC BY-NC-ND 3.0 license, so the author should be credited in the description. If you are not sure under which license is the artwork you wish to use, the safest way is to use free stock photos websites (like Pexels) providing pictures under CC BY-SA license, and still crediting the authors as much as possible. Calling your own an artwork made by another can lead to serious issues as said
@Snowfire
- particularly on a AT, where we all are creators :/