Thanks bro! Took me a while. But yours is pretty special too. Loved it. You could always try to turn it into an IDM track. You've got one of the glitchy sounds necessary for one! (Just in case you don't know about the IDM genre, look up Aphex Twin or Squarepusher)
Had a little fight with the heart/downvoter in the corner over there lol. Just in case you got several notifications about the comment here haha.
Took out the cut and mixed vocals in the beginning and just let the main voiceover run. Also slightly lowered the volume and introduced it into the song for better transition from voiceover to actual song.
Also, went into the "5...10...dollar" vocal cuts and rearranged them to make them fit a bit better.
Lastly, took the "decade" vocal cuts and made the "ecy" sound from it. Used that to offset the "ade" sound cuts and allow for a more ambient setting, whilst keeping the groove up.