ok that intro is awesome. but you bridge too soon (imo). after that epic intro have a beat drop for about 2-4 bars, and then the bridge, then another drop after the bridge. but still a cool track.
the intro has a nice atmosphere, but the second part doesn't really match the mood built during the intro imo. to give more depth & body to the horn/bass starting around
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, the exciter could help, as well as applying a quasar reverb with some vibrato (as long as it has strong HP and LP filters to avoid frequencies spilling all over the place). keep it up :)
yeah i just saw the ending of your track, was the original full track. I think you shouldve just made the beginning its own song! Good shit though, and I know this won't be the last great thing from you ;)