[track 8]

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"seriously go check RDz's other tracks, the man is an insanely gifted vocalist and creator so you're doing yourself a dis-service by not listening to the gems he releases. was amazing to get another track in the works together and as always hope you all enjoy what we created." - okin

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"it was an honor working with okin again. the ideas he brings to the table always inspire me, which is why i really enjoyed making this song. hope you like it!" - RDz

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[lyrics]

I've always fought alone

But what's the point when I can't win

Bleak visions weigh me down

And down I fall, down I fall again

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So here I am, here I am

Is it all worth saving

Here I am, here I am

Or am I overthinking

When the world starts shattering

And stars begin to fade

Can I still find my sanctuary

Or is this all that's left

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When I'm free-falling

Through an endless

Twilight sky

I'm slowly fading

Waking up, building up

My will to fly again

As I'm free-falling

And fighting gravity

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  • Vocals and production are unanimously compatible. Great work yall.

    • thanks, much appreciated!

    • Thank you for appreciating it

  • what a beauty, real melancholic vibes in this, fantastic work! <3 And as always RDz has such a gorgeous voice.

    If i could recommend some changes? As Dublion said below, some highs on the kick would be great. Or if not some highs, then some slight saturation on the kick to bring out its mids a tad would be fine.

    • i know the feeling. even after 2 years, mixing vocals still frustrates me at times haha

    • Feel free to DM me guys, always happy to help out! Vocals are so so tricky. I remember my first time mixing rap vocals and I must've spent 3 days straight numbing my brain listening to the same phrase about 1,00,000 times hahaha

    • As someone new to vocal editing and fixing I'm way out of my depth lol, however I'll try and check out the kicks and add what has been said. Might have to PM you about it Ollie :)

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  • <3

  • u made a pretty cool song, i would suggest editing the main vocals to fit the track more but everything is pretty cool on the song!

  • I seriously don't know why I like this.But, tbh, this IS pretty good

    • we both put a lot of effort in this so any positive response is always appreciated thanks

  • Quality work here :) As I get the style is lofi, this is probably a personal choice. You could add a little more high end to the kick. I wouldn't say it's muddy but it contrasts with how clear the song is.

    • thanks dublion! appreciate the feedback :)

    • Thank you bro for the suggestion If I get round to looking back in the draft I'll test it ;) much respect

  • Very beautiful work my friend

    • thank you, friend :)

  • Absolutely beautiful! Great work guys :]]

  • crazy

    great work from both, great mix.

  • FRIGGIN' YEAH!!