Cover of track Brutality by Dei Servus
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Brutality

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After getting over my mini writers block I came up with this great Idea. This was all made in the same day. took a few hours so excuse the many mistakes (cause I know there are alot.) This song was a mix between something emotional, hard, and cool-feeling so this is a fittting title.

Now wait! before you start skipping though the song wait throuigh it cause there are many cool parts, especially the end!!

btw(No samples ore oneshots used except loopmasters) comment and critisize one what could be better (cause theres alot) and tell me whhat you think

Enjoy!! :))

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    Dei Servus

    Seeing all these miatakes again makes me wanna come back and fix them.... shouldve waited longer...

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    Dei Servus

    true that haha very packed

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    abstract

    yeah, but it still haz great potential, such a packed song :)

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    Dei Servus

    Yeah i atill cant beleive i missed that hahHa but its already 5 mins youd think its too long already

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    abstract

    i think you should extend the song a little because the end would sound great if you progressed with triplets, maybe make a third drop

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    abstract

    had to come back to this :) that synth hits hard, great use of the 909 ( i think?) got some great drum sounds out of it. i think the organ part sounds all right even though the tonality changes. note at 2.48 is a little sketchy

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    tornsage

    nice sound man i dig it :)

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    Dei Servus

    its nt really dubstep really just electro I think. but definently not dubstep. but thanks for answering!!

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    Gravidon

    It's good, I'm just not really a fan of this type of Dubstep :/

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    Dei Servus

    I dont know it would sound really boring in the same chord I would think. but good feedback!! Thanks for your large comments you all ;) I enjoy getting a taste of my own medicine(for lack of a better metaphoric phrase) :P Thank you all amazing artists!!

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    amoeba

    OOH this is COOL!!! i really like the beginning synth. yeah, at 0:27 that synth is a bit weird. maybe you could have a muffled, pluck synth with some delay and reverb on it w/ barely any sustain bouncing off of some c to g fifths. but that synth works after, though, at around 0:40 . just by itself its a bit strange. and just keep the whole thing in c minor at 1:43 , that doesnt work. otherwise, this is great! awesome work! :)

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    Dei Servus

    oh I hear it now. Im surprised I didnt see that. thanks!!

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    Dei Servus

    I think i know what your talking about but yeah i thought i missed sone notes. Like i said, many small probs. But thank you!!

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    tophat

    Yes, he takes it to a major tonality briefly between 1:43 and 1:48 .. of course our ears are being trained that it should have minor tonality in this section, so I guess it's what you make. But you are right, consistency would be nice :p

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    Ante

    The organ emulation's notes at 1:43 and 1:48 . The highest note in both of these phrases sounds a half step too high for me