beautiful synths! i would love to hear a sub at the returning section, just an octave lower than the bass notes you already have. i like how this is more of an ambient track, the percussion just sort of sustains the flow of it. the reason i say you should add a sub at the end is because it sort of loses its power by then, if you add some bass there then it will make up for the absence of bass in the kick throughout. really nice, beautiful work :)
I'm not a fan of how off beat the intro is, but I really love the atmosphere in this. I love the voices in this too, it adds something unique to the song. Nice work!