So.... A bit longer than 2 weeks. I may have forgot. But I am back and working on it!
I added a gate and slope to the main synth for some sort of audible rise to the notes to get rid of the weird quick notes of the original. I changed the synth to sound more, how do I put it... garage-bandey? lofi like? I dunno right now. I need to fix the drums because they just sound bad and fall out of sync. made the last part the first as an intro to the main song. And changed the first to end in a minor chord if you will. Still is a wip, but sounds better.