I love the idea, but the execution is not so great. Fortunately, there's enough raw idea here that anyone can certainly remix and or remaster this track for you!
Good job overall. I love the sounds, they blend. I love the stuttering effects used with the rasselbok, which normally sound way too generic, you managed to mix them in nicely.
bass needs tuning, and the kicks might be a little too powerful, especially compared to the rest of your drum sounds.