gonna give some maybe not positive feedback so tw
it sounds like you just tried to extend one 16bar loop.
i wish it brought in something unexpected or changed one of the building blocks you have going on.
some part of me wished that after the bridge ( if u wanna call it that) the song developed more. :/
idk
it just feels monotone in a way.
i like the groove, i like the use of the old school percs, and i like the vibe. that being said, it doesnt tell a story or make me feel things