also, avoid making the use of the rasselbock obvious. it's there to make parts of your track interesting, but make sure you're using it in the most creative way you can.
on its own, the main synth feels a bit raw. but when you bring in the percussion, the sidechain, the panning, everything together creates this wonderful dreamy sound.
I like the stuttering. But, maybe add more more breaks between when it happens during the second part? Don't feel like you have to oblige listeners, though. It's your song after all.