Cover of track Atlas by ollie
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Atlas

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Just moved house, this is the first thing ive made since moving in. r8 me m8

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But nah in all seriousness, gimme dat critique eh

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    SOLACE

    i love it's prettiness

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    s k u l

    wHoAhDaDdY

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    solir

    woah

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    E-trim

    Kick could still be stronger. I would add very little variations in tat main melody synth. Maybe some velocity changes, some small variation in the melody itself at some random points. It sounds a little to repetitive imo. Maybe even go for some slight filter variation could make it sound more natural.

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      ollie

      And I'll see about kick as well, it's pretty damn close to red as it is. I'll probs just find another kixk

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      ollie

      Yo solid comment/critique man, these are the kind of comments Audiotool needs more of y'know? I'll take that advice about the melody onboard when Im in the app man.

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    nwokn

    yooo

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    ford.

    wicked percs man. the kick is a little weak but im digging this.

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      ollie

      cool cheers man, im in the app now so ill see to that! :)

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    ollie

    Thanks guys! Comment tho, what's wrong with it etc