Not bad. I would watch the levels of the noise, as it overpowers the synths and drums sometimes. Too much use of white noise can also be a bad thing, like at
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. Since it's not remixable I can't really tell you much else :/ But nice job, I see potential here :)
True. Thing is that I am accualy taking a music production class. This project was to make a Track with the same Melodies across the whole beat. But to change small parts to make not not so..Boring.