So, this really gives me a Savant - Sayonara vibe when the chords and melodies come in, I would have just put in some drums to match that last intense part. Also, the intro was carried out too long, and when the plucks came in I feel the pads should have as well. Apart from that, nice track
again, the melodies are done well but the mixing needs work. On the pan pipes btw, make sure you add reverb. I usually wire a reverb and a couple of pedals to the centroid aux output and anything i want reverb on just push the aux output level up. Sounds better than giving it a reverb pedal directly. Lower the volume and frequency on the chords to give it a sound more like a pad, also reverb it.