i'm in agreement with everyone that has posted. great first track. a little fine tuning and it could be so much better. still keep up the work and you'll improve in no time .
yeah right you sound like dronealpha or mike or perhaps southbronx and some day fontana hehe how you feel about it ? it's more important then anything....
Not bad at all for a beginner. As N.O.V.A. said, I think a pad will make it sound much better, it will fill the gaps where there is no synth playing. Overall I think you're on the right track. Keep me posted on your new music.
Well... Honest opinion... This is good for a beginner as said Kevv but i go far away... I think that the notes are really good and the beat too but you need add them fx or something like that... Anyway it is a good track ;)