I dig this. Great groove in the middle. I think the problem that people are having with the drums is that when they kick in at
0:34
they create an unexpected upbeat polyrhythm. I listened to the track a second time knowing that the drums were coming in and they fit great! One possible solution, intro with the drums rather than the synth. Just an idea.
nova is right... it is a liiittle to fast... a more melodic aspect seems to be missing, I think dnb is a great idea for this track, but you still need to focus on other parts too ;)