this is really cool, i really dig your rhythmic ideas and all the groupings in 3. also this track reminds me of a more neuro version of this old drumstep track in sound design and style (link is only visible to registered users)
in terms of advice/crit about development i don't have much because rn what u got is basically a 4 bar loop drop with variation, i'd say make a mood-setting intro and go from there
maybe also to continue the track try doing what you did with this drop and make another 4 bar loop drop that differs somewhat from this one but still sounds related, or create another synth and make a second half to this drop with different synths that ties in like this track: (link is only visible to registered users) , notice drop gets developed and changed @
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