The only thing I can really say is that the 808 is really out of key. If remix was on I could figure out what key they should be in. Some things I think you should learn are time signatures and and music theory; more specifically notes, and which ones sound the best together. I like how pumpy the kick is, it's just the right amount, and the mix is also good. You got a good idea going. Something else I can suggest is switching things up a bit, drums and melody wise. Search up EQ on Youtube