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crusher is less
idk wbat it sounds like though
every now and then
i try to write
pick up the pen
yet the lyrics are never right
i try to explain the feelings
yet they always overwhelm me
i try to tell her the story
but im frozen with fright
she didn't judge, not one bit
as i stood cold, frozen and hit
headlights blinding, leaving me where i stand
without a trace of goodbye, so i raise my hand
i embrace the dark, knowing its fair
yet also knowing i wont see her there
i know she's too good, for my soul at least
but at least she'll be happy, thats all i want to see
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if you want to know the meaning behind this one, just ask
enoy it while it lasts, i suppose
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Nice one.
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that intro was long.
I thought I was listening to an prelude for a moment.
It seems as though overall, you have a great sound choice but layering from what I've listened, seems to be where you struggle sometimes.
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my only crit is add layers to the melody and some bass lol
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the kick is weird
ill fix soon
