I find the bass a bit too strong, I would lower the gain on it a bit. To my ears its pushing the other sounds out a bit. Also, I would try changing up the sound on the base a bit, the moment in the loop where it repeats two notes kinda sounds off to me. Additionally, I would lower the volume on the wind-like sound. Like the base it seems a bit too pronounced.
For a first track, I would say its not half bad. I hope you do well in your exploration of music :)
