Not my taste but good work anyways. What I don't like is that you called it experimental. This is far away from being Experimental. And Trap/Hip Hop tracks on high places in the charts of not so common Genres doesn't go down well
yes I thought so, But if I stand nude in the townhall of Sankt Petersburg and sing amazing grace it isnt experimental only because I didnt do that before
i think you need to put a stop in there somewhere it' s got a good vibe to it but it needs some form of breakdown even if its just hats or a bare kick and snare pattern and i agree with t-khash you should do a sidechain sounding perc where you pan it and adjust the volume so it fades in and out the beat
add progression to perc. at :50 ish i could see a fill and then more percussion -- like a harder snare and a leading hi hat. as it is this is rhythmically intricate but boring. I cant see myself dancing to it.