This is a pretty solid start on a potentially great track! Now that you have a solid bone structure of a track like this to work with, try adding on more to it and give it some depth and variety :)
Anytime dude. And don't feel rushed to try and get your sound design perfect, because it just won'y happen fast. I've been doing this for about 3 years now and there's so much I'm still learning
Cool! Yeah, I’m not the greatest at sound design & stuff like that. I’ve been improving a ton on arrangement and stuff, but getting sounds right is something I’m trying to improve on :)