I feel like i listen to a 2014
@Pathfinder
's track - and that's a good thing.
For the constructive feedback, i pretty much agree with what flamento said, great composition work, the mix could still be improved to better convey the emotions you want to share !
I think the synths could have some stereo panning in different directions, they feel more in the middle so maybe put them on the sides. It sounds crowded but for the vibe you are going it's okay, this is just my personal preference. The bass could also use some other layer because it is empty, maybe have a bassier bass and cut some of the unneeded stuff that's making it really loud, make it less loud
composition is great: you never have any issues there. I feel the mix is probably where you could make some real improvements.
in particular, the drums are missing it's energy: kick doesn't quite hit like i'd expect, and the snare isn't so punchy. Look to give the kick a boost around 45-90hz range, and again around 3500hz. Add a cut around 160-400hz to give room to the rest of the track. The snare could be boosted around 140-200hz to give it some punch, and at ~800hz for a lil bit of rounding