composition is great: you never have any issues there. I feel the mix is probably where you could make some real improvements.
in particular, the drums are missing it's energy: kick doesn't quite hit like i'd expect, and the snare isn't so punchy. Look to give the kick a boost around 45-90hz range, and again around 3500hz. Add a cut around 160-400hz to give room to the rest of the track. The snare could be boosted around 140-200hz to give it some punch, and at ~800hz for a lil bit of rounding