bro this is so clean. Just needs some more changes in the leads and makin them cleaner and mixed better. But overal is very very good
My first attempt at EDM
I worked pretty hard on this, and did it all by myself.
I would appreciate feedback.
Special thanks to CeRix for tips and feedback on this song (and the cover)
2:56 is the best part in my opinion
Work in progress
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I am not going to say anything new, that's why I will shut up (a bit more sounds design would be nice tho)
But this is a mad banger tho. I love the background vocals. Overall a really uplifting feeling to it.
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real nicee
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This is still #10 on charts and it's a month old. lol
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The mixing and mastering is nonexistent, there's no sidechain, and the percussion sucks, and the sound design is super basic and uncreative. Those are the only problems I have with this track.
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All harsh crit aside, I'm actually very surprised you were able to make something this good at your level. The transitions are fantastic, the chords are p great, melodies are amazing, and I hear some neat hats in there too.
All around, nice job on making a good track!
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I did a remix? Quite short, but I did my best. Just added my own touch. Still think that the OG is better! Nice track Savori
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Jesus christ that last melody is so high
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Wow. I like this a lot! Nice Job!
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i like this
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Love the melody! And I KNEW I heard the High Pitch EDM Arp in there! (I'd know that sound anywhere- I used it in a bunch of my tracks lol)
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this is good
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ACTUAL FEED TIME:
0:00 - 0:08 : its waaaay to early for you to use vocals. and you should have made chords instead of that up and down synth thing
0:00 - 0:32 : you started amazing but after 0:16 it turned weird and it got to exciting at the worst part
0:44 - 1:04 : you nearly hit really nicely
1:04 - 1:20 : this would be better if you mixed it and layered it. bc its SO HIGH IT'S ANNOYING
more feed coming below bc im running out of chars
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So many words
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so my conclusion:
- learn how to mix
- learn sound design
- nice drums but not edm presets
- don't use vocals yet
- layerrr
- use more effects
- turn down the highs got damnit
- this is amazing but it has it up and downs... litterally and figuratively
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More Feed:
The whole song: drums are not edm
1:20 - 1:36 : unaturally long transition
1:51 - 2:09 : that be the only time i like that up and down synth thingy
2:09 - 2:23 : nice. but random
2:23 - 2:39 : Damn those drums are really nice. but no sidechain
2:39 - 2:55 : repeated the first drop. was not executed well. and more weird stuff
2:55 - end : holy crap gg that melody is amazing and would be better if better layered... and not so much highs
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pretty good, but i'm to new to give you any real crit.
