Ngl, I like the second drop a lot better than the first, cuz I can't rly hear the lead in the first. The melodies are all so cool though! You guys rly work well together! :)
I love the melody and it has so much potential omg :o
I would recommend changing the kick or the pitch to be a little more deeper, sidechaining a little harder and making the beautifully created plucks a little more outstanding when it drops. But this is awesome
our collabs in a nutshell: i create base melody. he refine melody. i make alt melodies based off of refined melody for things like drop #2 and stuff. he make treble sound design. i make subs/basses. he make drop #1. i make drop #2 building off of drop #1. mixing mostly as we go. we tweak mixing and mastering at the end. then i come up with name and make cover.