I honestly have no problems with it man. It's mixed reasonably, got a decent vibe Maybe the only thing that could improve is the arrangement. The first break should be moved. At .29, use .43, then copy the section .47 to .56 but phrase the melody different on the 2nd iteration. After that put the part from 56, and let it play to the end of what you have there. You could use the end bit twice with melody variation then use the cut out drop at .30 to com back to the swelling chorus.
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Basically rework the order of the sections to give it more cohesive narrative, as it is it's just kind of random. Like if you were to write a good form paragraph, then scramble the order of the sentences. Anyways, I really like the vibe and sound design though. Hope this helps
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These songs get better and better each time.
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Haven't seen Climo on my feed in forever, damn
