i love the kick pattern, it feels like its off but its on. I do think it could use some mastering though. the LFO synth at
00:54
is godly. I love the chord progression too. The drops is very uniqe and i like it but i think after the first loop you need to add some more stuff, its gets dry and kinda repetitive. I like how your trying to be unique with the high-end kick but it hurts the drop by taking some feeling out of it. If i was you i would try to make up for it somehow. The background perc
Also, notice the change between the first and second drop. The first is bare and empty like I said, but still pleasant of course. The second has tons of chord changes and such. I think this is important because normally you wouldn't expect much of a difference between the two drops, but when the second drop hits, you're pleasantly surprised by how it has evolved and went from empty and cold to a nice, warm, and full feel. The transition in feels here is what's most important.
I think the point of the drop is to be chill and lacking of all these percs and sound effects and synths everywhere. It makes it feel nice and cold, empty, and makes you focus more on the essentials in the song instead of all the random noises coming at you from every possible direction. I see where you're getting at though.