i would say you need to add something to keep the listener interested.
you have the energy and the mood down, no one can mistake what this track is supposed to make you feel, but if you want the whole song to be listened to, you should add more variation to the beat. A good way to do that is by switching up the kick pattern here and there, or writing a new melody that can show the listener something new to pay attention to. i feel like im listening to the same thing 8 times :) hope this helps