Weird bpm for me. Ever time i make something at 140 it sounds too dubsteppy with the drums. So i tried to make the whole trackwithout drums. didnt work :/ so i just threw in some shit and it ended up working so yaya
These are not loop-friendly chords. Way too much forward momentum for them to go nowhere. They never have a chance to settle, which gives the track a bit of a constantly progressing feeling, which undercuts the calmness of the track. Music is like language, and the chords here are like saying, "Y'know, I was thinking." It works well leading into a complete thought, but you can't have a conversation just saying, "Y'know, I was thinking," over and over. You gotta actually say what it was.
Maybe the drums become too loud around
00:55
but that's the only thing I can say. When everything comes together it balances out all the impurities and sounds really nice.