So me personally:
I'd noticeably change up the song because it's too repetitive (Like @»»ᅳSᅳᅳoᅳᅳrᅳᅳaᅳ► mentioned)
Make sure the 808s are in tune and loud enough
Add some more elements to the track. (Arps, melodies, chords, etc.)
I get that it's only been a month and you're new around here but try to refrain from using too many samples in a track without anything else.