00:26
until the beat drops. I might be wrong but that snare pickup sounds like it's off beat, and then when the beat drops (the other sounds come in) it sounds like it's on the upbeat, if that makes sense? I think it would be better if the snare came in on the down beat and then followed with an increase in tempo until the drop.
again, the second drop feels off beat, correct me if I'm wrong but it sounds like it comes in on the upbeat, which feels off. the last half of the song, again, has no difference when compared to the first. there's no new sounds or anything new in terms of mixing really save for a few drums fills or minor changes in tempo
When the drop hits, I i8mmediately hear the bassline machine in it's default sound preset. Idk if anyone still likes hearing this sound, but regardless, I don't think it fits in this track.
again, your transitions need work everywhere.
01:10
and then it just drops off. The next part feels like a totally different song at first. Eventually it comes around to feeling like the same song, but the notes in that transition don't adequately deliver the vibe I think you're trying to maintain