Interesting! The bass at the end while fading out us a little loud for me tho. Also im not sure if its part of the percussion, but theres "thumps" that are pretty quiet but have really strange rythm and im not sure i like that 😬
nice track, I like the main chord synth and the arps at
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are pretty cool! Try not to worry too much about charting, just keep making tracks and developing your craft, seems like you've got some potential! A lot of clicks on this site are driven by networking, so if charting is something that is a big motivator for you, reach out to people whos work you admire and ask for collabs, hang out in the facebook group, discord etc...