Mixing needs fixing, that 808 is a bit low (I can barely hear it). I'd suggest either making it higher by an octave, or making the volume higher. Take some of the mids out too. The kick doesn't hit as hard as it should, so you should compress it and boost the lows and highs, then take out some of the mids out of that too (Like 2-4db). 01:22 needs a better transition, more effects could've been used to make it stand out more.
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