whoa that intro!!! so cool! a little ear piercing, as is the track overall, remember to check for clipping!
this is a very trippy messy kind of feel. I like it because it's not so musical, but it is still pleasant, just needs a little bit of EQ love. nice job!
we've all been there, don't sweat it too much, just keep working and writing and improving!! that's all that matters to me :) if you're passionate, the rest will follow.
if you ever have questions or need help, you can message my wall, and I'd even be willing to hop into the studio if I have time to give you some hands on advice :)