The overall mixing isn't phenomenal from a general pov. But for whatever reason I really love how the drums are mixed with the instruments. This is extremely beautiful. I listen to it often. It's only the mids and high mids that are clashing way too much. Fix those, and this track will be stellar
this is cool, i like the soundscape going on. i do feel like the screams are a bit out of place though, especially since there are no lyrics beforehand and the whole instrumental cuts out to emphasize them. you could get away with a blackgaze sound if you screamed a bit higher like shrieks
it's also pretty short, it seems like a track that could build for wayyy longer and have a better payoff
publishing tracks before they are finished is so you don't forget they exist when you get bored or uninspired 8 bars in and then come back to it after 10 more unfinished tracks!!!!!!!!!!! (its a really good work ethic i swear)