The breaks at
1:29
and
3:55
give the already good chorus so much more power and feeling to it. The mixing is great, the melody feels natural, and the chords fit in perfectly. What a fantastic demonstration of talent! Keep it up!
This is why I love chiptune. It doesn't need all this fancy synthwork or mastering to get a beautiful sound of it. And the way you guys have constructed this, it really shows the power of chiptune. Great work!
ya'll should definitely be less modest. This is awesome and you should both be proud of yourselves, no matter what amount of work you feel you did or didn't do. Give yourselves credit for the obvious talent you both possess and tell your story! Besides, if you had fun, I think that's all that really matters, right?