Firstly, the guitar and synths sound great, but they aren't mixed correctly and drown all the other features of the track. If you, for example, EQed out the low end of the synths, each instrument in the track would be way more defined. Also, the drums are not loud enough (especially the kick!). Finally and most importantly, the 808s are not in tune with the melody. I recommend sitting down and tuning the 808s tediously until you get a sense of what is in key and what isn't.
not the final version
gonna make a part 2 without any leads
hope you enjoyed, share, like and make sure to leave any feedback or collab requests you might have.
Create an account or Login to write a comment.
-
-
Yeah I did realize the leads were kind of clashing with the 808s but I don't know how to mix at all. Thanks for the feedback and advice, I appreciate it, but how do you tune 808s? I usually just keep changing the pitch until it doesn't sound weird but I don't know how to specifically tune them.
-
(i ran out of comment space lol) Keep up the great work!
-
-
My biggest snapshot yet lol
