Well, I'm not a crit guy, never like to do it but saw this on the board.
Running 17 Heisenberg's I would expect way crazier synth design.
Also would work more on structure, it is very chaotic.
Mixing is required. It is really hard to crit anything at all because there is too much going on IMHO.
Best of Luck. Good saying is, it's not about how many tools u have, but about how u use them.