i tried to do some lyrics, i sped up the song so my actual voice isn't very recognizable xd

lyrics:

a cliché love story

teenage dreams, so stormy

I digress

let's go to the park

hearing the mourning doves

coo and fly

fly up high into the light

maybe it's too early

love's something I find scary

however I think the roses are pretty

the sun's shining bright

reaching new heights

I daydream a lot

about the days

when i'm with her

when I see her

I was bored so I took the opportunity. @Axtros is amazing at this <3

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  • this is beautiful wth

  • 'let's go to the park

    hearing the mourning doves

    coo and fly

    fly up high into the light'

    how did you do this?! I try to sing along and I can't even get the timing right lol

    omg this is so beautiful fr I'm addicted to this sound rn.

  • omg I figured out why everything is so damn quiet.

    it's the samples! They're not normalized, so they're all quiet AF

    I had to bounce em, and reimport them now they sound WAY better.

    I'll lyk what else happens but if you wanna see how this is done, lmk I'll invite you to the draft

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  • Republished

    remix enabled i think

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  • can you please open this for remix?

    • done! how about now?

    • let me try republishing

    • also are you sure it's turned on? You may have to repub for the change to take effect. I'm not seeing the remix button tho, and I've refreshed a few times

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  • The phrase "mourning doves" strikes me

    Aren't doves usually supposed to be a sign of peace, freedom, and love?

    I like the juxtaposition of that idea <3

    • okay fair LOLL

    • yeah they're real cute until it's 3AM on summer vacay and they won't stfu lmao

      they're one of the most widely hunted birds, if that tells ya anything

    • LOLLL i don't think we have them but their coo's are so cute <33333

      (fun fact, I'm a sucker for birds. always have been LOL)

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  • i just realized the "days" i sounded like i had a voicecrack LOL

    i got closer to the mic by accident 💀

  • @Axtros u home yet? im curious to what u think :0

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  • I'll listen to the thing when I get home