Cover of track New Album Coming Soon? [FEEDBACK] by althruist
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New Album Coming Soon? [FEEDBACK]

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I need some feedback on this track on how I can improve it and such! This will also be part of a new album (ooo) AND your feedback will affect ALL of the songs in the album!

Any kind of critics help, as long as it's constructive! :)

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    palestinium_

    wouldn't say more than waht chonoes said, although i think if you could just make the start a little more interesting, i think you have the first bar as that intro, make the second bar have that melody thing that comes in a little later (make that sound fade in in the second melody and push the rest a little closer.

    or at bar 3 the drums could come in (fading in) or both honestly why not

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    Khalid

    nice, I can tell you did a lot with the heisenberg LFOS and other stuff, overall sounds good

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    Chonoes

    1/2

    this is a beautiful song! and as you asked, here are some things i noticed:

    the sweep at 0:33 i think should be a slightly lower frequency because it doesn't really fit that well there

    the cut on and off at 0:34 should be slightly faster

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      althruist

      thank you for the awesome feedback redguy! <3

      I'll definitely work on that when I get to remake the full version of this song and I will keep in mind the suggestions for future projects. Much appreciated and thanks for the kind compliment! ^^

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      Chonoes

      2/2

      there's a really quiet synth that comes in at 0:36 that i think should be slightly louder

      you should have another section of the song at 1:00 that is even louder then the section before it

      that's all i can think of off the top of my head, it's a great song :)