OUT ON YOUTUBE AND SOUNDCLOUD
need help!!!
someone tell me what it needs !
or ill invite you and help me out!
for "ML" my love / girlfriend
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she left me btw guys dont listen to other ppl when they tell you their "good" or "bad"
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so shewas my first gf and she was the baddest gf i ever had she told me so much freaky shit like she was so cool i thought but evey day ppl gave me shit abt her bc i "stole her from my best friend" but she never liked him and ppl told me once a player always a player and ppl gave me hints tat she was tlking to other guys but i brushed it off but when i confronted her abt it she kinda got mad and was like if ur gonna accuse me of cheating then we can break up
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long story i want to talk abt it but its long asf
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sad bro what happend?
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is it better?
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better ig
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Solid 4/10 tbh
In terms of hiphop, needs a little more spice and the 808 sounds off-key. Try using the chorus effect and repitching the 808. Also the melody's a bit weird. Not something I can really help with, just something you need to know music theory for.
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forgot to stop the beat where it ends lmao
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"beautiful thoughts" ~ Esabell V.
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better version plz give feedback
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wayyyy better lmk rate 1-10 tell me what it needs im not scared of yalls comments i need improvement im still learning we all make mistakes!!!
