I feel that the kick in the beginning of this is way too loud. There's not a lot of other stuff going on, so it's not messing with things too much. It's not too bad, but if this was a busier mix, it might start causing issues. Just a friendly suggestion <3
I also love the original track, and have tried my hand at remixes in the past with no success.
This is a cool cover! Nice job recreating it