Nice ideas, the sound design could use some work though. The track gets very repetitive, so add some more elements every 4/8 bars to make it less boring to listen to. Mixing is pretty bad too, I'd fix that first out of everything. Nice work though.
I like it but the drop feels with too much things, I would make the first section with just kick/snare and sweeps and the second with the hat, and maybe use a different kick/snare at the buildup and on the drop, but the melody is on point and the sounds are really well done, and well, the melody is maybe too repetitive