Ok so, it’s crit time, so u took the melody from the original which is fine but I think you could have made something much more interesting if u didn’t just reverse the chords, you once sent me to a song in which u made the chords for the song, I know u can do this, it would be cooler if u added more synths, maybe a lead playing a melody, it could literally be a Rhodes preset I don’t care. Another thing that I think is rly useful is the 8 bar rule, every 8 bars u need to add something new.
I agree with you, it would be possible to make a more diverse melody, but for some reason lately I like a monotonous 5 bar melody (you need to try the rules of 8 bar)