I should make this a series tbh.

If you dont like the snare lmk, i'll be making changes like as soon as i pub this. not like anyone checks my songs. feedback would be appreciated.

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  • Que pro

  • Gosh this sounds so clean?

    • Why when i get banned i make stuff like this.

  • pro

  • i keep forgetting i make music

  • holy sh!t this is god level considering u only took 42 minutes! XD

    this will take me a good 20 hours LOL

  • amazing

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    Sounds a bit clean now, off to the lead

  • No one asked you to do this XD

    But on a serious note, you did a good job!👍

  • idk what to say lmao it's already been said

    • all been said

    • you got any problems or has it all been said?

    • lol, its good

  • I personally do not like extreme distortion on the note at 0:06 , also make sure you fill the freq spectrum up, I can hear the saw and sub well but the bass region seems empty. The mix without the lead sounds good but the lead is pretty buried once it does show up. It is a nice bit but could use more melodicity. I like the direction your sound design has been headed tho.

    • Feedback is much appreciated lad, thx :D!

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  • This is seriously dope, however I think it has a lot of potential to be even better as a full song if you put the time in. I think right when you ended the track you could sneak in a slightly more bluesy variation of the lead followed by a white noise transition and breakdown with just the synths, prolly something airy and ambient before bridges and picks up again... Sounds confusing but that's sorta the gist of what I'm imagining lmao

    • i might just change the lead tho, its only supposed to be used as a backup for the real thing. which might come today if i cant sleep this night. Plus i got some ableton songs to work on

    • sounds like something for tomorrow lad. also thanks for the feed and the fav

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  • Noice!

    (And the snare is fine lol)

  • Republished

    fixed stuff

  • it sounds so empty

  • Republished

    horrible lead