it's technically well done, though i'm getting a lack of mids and a funky sounding sub--can't tell exactly what's wrong with it, it just sounds weird to me. is it not put into mono? also that crushed pluck has trouble piercing through the saws you have. you've got the sound design skills, so i recommend trying to make something more unique :)
no, it's not that, i'm fine with a bendy bass (i've used them myself before). it sounds to me like it's taking up too much stereo width when generally a sub should be put into mono