I'm working on improving my tonal balance. It's important for me that my mixes sound bright and full of energy, but not sharp and thin. The pulv and heisenberg oscillators are not as bright as I initally thought, and giving a slight boost to the treble with a high shelf helped tremendously.

For the melody, I used several saw patches. One was heavily stereo separated and didn't have much bite. I added another synth which was more coarse and was more agressive. I added a chorused pluck to beef up the midrange, as well as a pad with white noise to add brightness to the sides of the mix.

I would love to hear some honest feedback :)